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Arutkumar
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 What did I do wrong... (poem) We were so closed together
Now so apart
We happened in between?
I can only feel in my heart
I wish you were here
To talk with me today
But I can’t give a call
My mind won’t obey
Things seemed to be so perfect
Now they seem so wrong
I don’t feel as though I know you
Where has our love gone?
You used to be able to talk with me
About everything you felt
Now I feel I’m a stranger
My heart is starting to melt
We always used to talk
Until the middle of the night
I don’t know what we talked about
But never once in a fight
I need you in my life
I need you as my friend
I need to laugh and cry with you
Forever till the end
I still don’t know what has happened
Our friendship has lasted so long
But I can’t help from wondering
What did I do wrong…
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Raj
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 Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Hi Arul, Very nice and meaningful poem... While reading, two things comes in my mind... LOVE and FRIENDSHIP... Quote: We were so closed together
Now so apart
We happened in between? Hmm, this is what happening now...
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Arutkumar
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Yes you are right...
It's the time which separate us...
But even though we are miles apart, thoughts about will be still lingering in my mind and heart…
 We had a real good time few years ago…
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Raj
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Hi, Yes, you are right.... I wish, when there is a chance to meet, hope to fully utilize the day as what we spend few years ago.. Counting the day..... 
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Arutkumar
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Ya me too. 58 days to go. 
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Inbarasi
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Nice poem arul.... 
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Raj
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Hmm.. when counting for a day, 1sec is like 1 day... but when the day comes, 1 day is pass like 1 sec... 
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Arutkumar
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Ya lah. Like the other day. Feel like we just had a very little time together...
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Raj
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Yea... that why, im prefer to meet when there is enough time. Im rather to wait instead just meet for few hours only.
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Arutkumar
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Ya you are right. I guess you wished to visit zoo... My idea is why wana waste money on that? Just look at Shas pic. 1000 artham sollum... 
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shasnita
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) aruuuuuutttttttttt  ... great bday gift 4m u... m cool ny... yeahhhh....
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Raj
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Dont angry Inba... then you become older faster...  Birthday gift? when was/is your birthday?
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Inbarasi
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Raj...its Shasnita....
Anyway gurl when was ur birthday...
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Raj
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Oops sorry... Wrong person 
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Arutkumar
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Re: What did I do wrong... (poem) Dear All,
I'm glad to infor you all that our Shasnitha is celebrating her 22nd Birthday tomorrow (10th March).
Anyway Happy Birthday Sweet Girl!!!
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